Great drawing...reminds me of my housemate

I like the different hues you put in her skin, makes it interesting. Also the hair is done well. Maybe the darkness under the right eye can be lightened?

Very good pic. Keep posting!

some points you may like to take note.....
the forehead is too high, the eyes are not level.
the color you use in the skin are well but the stroke you can try to make them more even....
the hair is quite well done this time only feel a little too heavy on the right top, the volume can be cut down.
I can see you have some improvement in this drawing.
keep up the good work~

Very good work!

To say it with Arenhaus words: Keep your eyes open for "Drawing Heads and Hands" by Andrew Loomis.
You need a guide to practice proportions.

GOT THE EXPRESSION
UR WORK COULD BE MUCH BETTER.

You have improved your skills quite a bit. I like the bold use of color. I do think the left eye (portrait right side) cornea is too close to nose and shading makes it look like she has been hit in the eye.

So only a nudge over to the outer corner for the corner, and tone down the purple shading and you're much closer. Very big improvement, getting closer to finding your style. I really like the sensual look to her lips and the tousled hair.

you need more shadow on her neck. work hard

There is some improvement, but you still focus on detail so much it makes you lose the cohesive general form. In this case, you managed to keep the left eye and nose more or less together, but misplaced the right eye and the mouth. The shading looks quite artificial, too, as if different face parts were lit by different light sources. Some do not have shadows, some have a little shadow, some have heavy shadows - all in various directions, the tone system is not solid.

Some things about the tone suggest a similarity to a photo. If you indeed worked from a photo, I'll urge you to do live drawing - it is loads better. If it is a live drawing, you need to get thinking like a camera out of your system, in my opinion.

Try looking at your work in a mirror while you sketch, now and then - it will help you to not get so absorbed and lose track. And I second the Loomis suggestion, not just for "DHH" but for other books - check the "plane approach" and five-tone system of tonal composition.

Keep working.

you have improved a lot very good job yeah the fore head is a lil too big but keep drawing experians makes masters! +8

It looks like perhaps you had a difficult light source hitting your subject. It's often difficult to recreate the affects of strong light and shadows with colour pencils unless you have an incredibly wide range of colours and tones in your box.
None the less, this is a good rendering with a good attempt at light control and good textures. Well done! +7

By the way - I agree totally with Arenhaus, if you can get a 'live' subject to draw, do it! It's much easier than photos (you have to simulate too much from photos) and more effective.

You are good at showing different expressions in their faces.
The forehead is too long, and the hair looks very sticky. Try making the hair more smooth and wavy!

I like the colours